Critique 01 / 02
Katsushika Hokusai
Weight 50%
“The bridge’s wooden curve lacks the fierce tension of my boards—too gentle, too soft. A footbridge must strain against its pilings, not melt into Monet’s mist. You have traded the pulse of carved grain for watery dreams. Bold lines, yes, but where is the wood’s stubborn soul?”
Weight 50%







